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Write an Email: structure and tone

Write a clear, polite email that covers every point in the task, with the right tone for the reader.

In this lesson you will

  • Organise an email in four parts
  • Choose formal or semi-formal tone
  • Cover every bullet point clearly

Learn

Structure: (1) Greeting — Dear Professor Lee, / Hi Sam, (2) Purpose — one sentence saying why you’re writing. (3) Body — one short paragraph per task point, with specific details (dates, times, what you need). (4) Closing — a polite request or thanks, then Best regards, / Thanks, and your name.

Tone: professors, offices and companies → polite and fairly formal (I was wondering if…, Could you…?, I would appreciate…). Classmates → friendly but still clear.

Cover every point. The task lists three things to do; missing one lowers your score. Tick them off.

Be concise. Clear, specific sentences are better than long, general ones. Leave a minute to check grammar and spelling.

Examples

  • Purpose: “I’m writing to ask about joining the photography club.”
  • Request: “Would it be possible to attend the second half of meetings?”
  • Closing: “Thank you for your help. Best regards, Ana”

Vocabulary

purpose

the reason for writing

polite

showing good manners

appreciate

be grateful for

“I would appreciate your advice.”

concise

short and clear

regards

used to end an email politely

“Best regards,”

Practice

1 / 7

Best greeting for a professor?

Writing

Your campus apartment’s heating has not worked for three days. Write an email to the housing office: describe the problem, explain how it affects you, and ask when it will be repaired.

  • ☐ Greeting and purpose
  • ☐ All three points covered
  • ☐ Polite request
  • ☐ Closing
0 / 100+ words

Lesson quiz

1 / 4

How many paragraphs should the body usually have?

Review

Key points

  • Greeting → purpose → one paragraph per point → closing.
  • Polite, clear tone.
  • Cover every point; check at the end.

What you learned

  • ✓ I can structure an email.
  • ✓ I can choose an appropriate tone.
  • ✓ I cover every task point.

KitWren is independent and not affiliated with ETS. This is original practice written by KitWren, modelled on the task types introduced in January 2026; it is not official TOEFL material. Any score shown is an educational estimate — not an official TOEFL score. Check ets.org for the current test format.